Sunday, December 4, 2016

Primal Instinct... Comments

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Primal Instinct

Wrapping ourselves in rainbows
trying to make life bearable
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Annette Aitken
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Terry Craddock 10 January 2017

'Wrapping ourselves in rainbows trying to make life bearable trying to move forward. Can awaken the monster within, the awareness of our surroundings avoid the darkness.' beautiful, fear is primal, love is universal, love is the warmth the light of fire in the darkness

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Bill Cantrell 06 December 2016

Oh yes! ! ! You are indeed the poetess I knew you were, in between the colors of the rainbow you have dared to cast your eyes and you have indeed found the desire of life and you have and will continue to enhance it! I agree with Judith, this ranks as one of your best! !

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Savita Tyagi 05 December 2016

Lovely poem. Life's problems so often do not go away we just have to find some way to block their effects with our rainbows even if it is an illusion. A very clear and practical message delivered so poetically. Thanks for sharing.

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Clarence Prince 05 December 2016

...a guidance out of the dark lead us to the escape door. Such a door, we failed to find when needed! Thanks for sharing!

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 December 2016

Love and life. With all the dreams around us. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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