Primal Desire Comments

Optimal use of words is the beauty of this nice poem. Thoughts provoking too 10+++

wow...holesum its strong and raw...like its supposed to be very well written indeed i recomned my Magic touch & a date with memsahib cheers

in my mouth your whole moan and groan fireworks in the sky Yes, that is the primal desire that has now perverted into the moans and groans of life. Sensual but beautifully penned. CP

hmn...that's the real desire, reshma! Good one!

Beautiful images here Reshma....sensual write...thank you...Fi 10++

You When naked You over me On my neck Like vampire Bleeding teeth My hands On your roundness In celebration The dark angel Some new goddess When you tore My chest To break open My heart See inside The color of blood Whether it resembled Yours or not Secrets no trust From dead You make me up Some earthly love This time

Comment: oohh! ! ooopss........that was not the intention at all sadiq trust me............just feelings penned...well thanks anyway.......

Great and beautiful composition...fireworks everywhere on display...10+++

poetic fireworks on primal desire..sensual write well pinned down...10

You will make many to wet their pants Reshma, a superb write, in magic realism, claiming in the end that primal desire is love and soul. Is not art real human feelings or just created by isloated minds? 10++++