Thursday, March 1, 2012
Prima Materia Comments
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How can we have emotions,
When the seas and primal mud did not?
What chemical is the magic potion
That leaves us with the world we got?
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8/24/2025 1:43:16 PM # 1.0.0
Loved it! I submitted a comment earlier but got lost, I think. Good smoothly flowing work, evident of your skills, and experience. The word brothers is offering a heavy sound effect, not 100% compatible, but the poem is lovely like the poetess. I posted one today, Standing Athwart. A nautical tongue twister, but manly, ghostlike and handsome. Smiles to you, and thank you!