Friday, July 27, 2018

Pride Of Self Adorning You Comments

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On your neck hangs an ocean pearl
shaded with hints of pink and blue
unshelled, pried open to the world,
its pride of self adorning you.
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Valsa George 29 July 2018

Pride and vanity pave way to one's own destruction! However opulent one may appear at first, eventually all light will fade away and plunge him in darkness! Beautifully and succinctly put!

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Kostas Lagos 28 July 2018

Ah! Vanity! It makes a great poem in the right hands! Splendid!

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Practicing Poetess 28 July 2018

The pearl's natural beauty outshines the vanity of its wearer. Well done, my Swashbuckling Fellow Poet! :)

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Rini shibu 28 July 2018

Lovely poem about ocean pearls Nicely penned

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Robert Murray Smith 27 July 2018

Vanity has its own ocean but no pearl. An excellent write. ++10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 July 2018

Ocean of pearls is hung on neck. Pride is adored for a moment. Mother EARTH HAS DEEP LOVE FOR US. Her wings of appreciation are spread. Pearls shine by touch of light. A powerful composition is shared with vivid imagery and imagination...10

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