Monday, August 27, 2007

Pride. In The Way Comments

Rating: 5.0

the sun can't shine too far or else
we burn up whole and devour the rest
of our inanimate lectures
on wrong and wrong and still moral wrong
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Fallen Too Far
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Scarlett Treat 27 August 2007

I love the rythm of this poem....it has a definate 'beat' that would sound great when read aloud...it makes me think of Ginsberg's HOWL...with the hopeless sound of some of the words. Super well done, and off it goes to my favorites list!

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