Pride And Poetry Comments

Two brilliant lines that provoke the mind. Cleverly written. Yes.pride will always gets us! into trouble!

Interesting composition Shaun...pride often comes before a fall. It is actually the worst of the seven deadly sins.. think of Lucifer! I'm sure your poetry will transcend any potential trouble as it is very varied and doesn't take itself too seriously..which is great. It's certainly a full score of five from me!

Ha! I get in trouble all the time, too!