Wednesday, February 19, 2014

Pride And Pain Comments

Rating: 5.0

A dream unfled and smoothed the cheat
and soon soothed out all pained conceit,
And nagging memories of old faux pas
Are often noticed like keloid scars,
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Danny Draper
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R.benjamin Abate 06 April 2014

Love this write. Yes this is real, I am awake!

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Soulful Heart 06 April 2014

My feelings in your words here.....i agree with every word of this nostalgic poem......and yes we always wish themto b a dream...

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Karen Sinclair 28 February 2014

Such a touching write Danny. I think we all have days weeks even months like these. Beautiful piece of poetry. Ty for sharing. Karen

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Susan Lacovara 21 February 2014

An incredible declaration of a rollercoaster ride of emotion. What eloquent words to be immersed in...you pen has been missed. I was especially riveted, if not haunted, by your words, to leave bones cold in loveless ash...wickedly honest and wonderfully pure. PEACE

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Valerie Dohren 19 February 2014

Wow Danny, quite a write - takes a lot of reading and digesting, but very much up to your usual high standard. So pleased you are posting again. Keep up the very good work!

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Danny Draper

Kiama, New South Wales, Australia
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