Pride And Ego Comments

very meaningful lines and insightful too, VS....and I like the style in which it is written too, for rather than pointing at others, the persona here talks about oneself and lets the reader reflect...the rhythm too is very apt...

You have a good theme. people live giving and recieving like nature does, otherwise, we won't survive like nature wouldn't. what is sad about it is we do have feelings. it is more important for us how to deal with the real feelings along with any incidents happening in life.

I scrach others even though I used to think I hadn't. In ways like nature does, we live recieving and giving. You write a right theme of life! I like it!

A really great poem, really like it, a great write.