..Pride A Collection Of 7 Deadly Sins Comments

I think the first word should be reworked 'Sited' is not a word, did you perhaps mean seated?

Like all things in life, moderation should be used. to be a proud person in moderation and with humble respect for others is a good quality, but to allow it to blind you to the truths in life it becomes not only a terrible flaw but it blinds you to the truth as you so imagiatively put it... A mouse to think he's a lion But fools beneath the disguise A mouse is always a coward Not a mighty lion Great poem Eyan! Most certainly a 10+++ Jen

The poem points out the image of Satan as depicted in the truth of pride as a sin. And I agree with you it is indeed among the deadly seven sin according to the catholic tradition. In fact the fall of Satan and his angels (according to the story) caused by pride. However, I am convinced that man should have pride in his heart. It is only, knowing what pride really is- the healthy disposition of a balance personality. The pride is actually a right attitude in our selves by knowing our strength and weakness, potentiality and limitation, fullness and emptiness; in order for to project the right image in the right place with the right people at the right time. The poem is nice….please read my poem pride as my support to my “argument” (used in the discipline of philosophy) above. Thanks

Quite an interesting poem: 'Fools fool by fool' Foolish Pride. good write Eyan...a 10

A mouse cannot stand boldly before a cat, leave alone a lion.

Short, pointy and real.

Fools fool by this fool......wow what a line made here....great poem about pride....Hope you read this aloud here in PH...sigh we dont have slam poetry here! ! ! well done.........

'A mouse to think he's a lion But fools beneath the disguise A mouse is always a coward Not a mighty lion' love it, Eyan! great poem, thank you for inviting me to read it! :)

Beautifully penned. Pride is the root of sins, it befools all. Wonderful allegory. CP

I get it! I love the last few lines! Interesting write!

A fools fool indeed well put the devil lurks every where only the weak sucumb you have a holy point plus 9 from me =10 regards

pretty cool so many fools 10+++ :)

pride good write 10...

well expressed! ! ... good job! !

it's a great one by the way keep writing :)

nicely done dear..well expressed