Wednesday, November 21, 2012

Pride Comments

Rating: 4.7

A stone cast into the sky
Must surely fall down to the earth
No matter how greenish the grass is
It is a rich delicacy to herds
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Babatunde Aremu
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Debdarshana Sen 03 December 2012

Best line to me-No proud can see God.

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Neela Nath Das 25 November 2012

Pride kills the soul of a person. But, when, a person reaches to a height, he can't see the world below. Loved the job! Really.

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Matthias Pantaleon 24 November 2012

very rich and educative......nice poem!

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Femi Oloidi 22 November 2012

Dear poet, i love the message u potray, n ur choice of words. But i believe, u could do better, like much better, u are a good poet, although u look more like a lawyer. Lol. keep up the good work, and stay blessed. Kingfemi

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The proverbial saying, pride goes before a fall has been well driven home by you Mr Aremu. I feel you are in a pedagogue`s mood these days and fine it is. Again a good poem with didactic value..

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