Thursday, September 15, 2016

Prickly Thorns Comments

Rating: 5.0

I seized the rose
And kissed her close
On her petal lips
For sweet bliss.
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Rajesh Thankappan
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Hans Vr 22 September 2016

Fantastic, an old metaphor put in a splendid new dress. I like it. 10+

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Mihaela Pirjol 16 September 2016

Amazing flow, rhythm and rhyme, and a direct analogy to how Love affects our emotional state: from bliss to disappointment. A lovely write.

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