Tuesday, November 10, 2009

Price Well Above All Rubies Comments

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Women on the edge of being just
a little overweight are more enticing
than those with narrow hips and flattened bust
who on the runways are more like the sugared icing
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gershon hepner
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Jack Williams 10 November 2009

It's really interesting the way your clauses overlap your lines. Most poets (myself included) use line-breaks as punctuation, but the way you do it gives your poems an unusual flow. It's also pretty cool the way you reference your inspirations.

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