Women on the edge of being just
a little overweight are more enticing
than those with narrow hips and flattened bust
who on the runways are more like the sugared icing
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It's really interesting the way your clauses overlap your lines. Most poets (myself included) use line-breaks as punctuation, but the way you do it gives your poems an unusual flow.
It's also pretty cool the way you reference your inspirations.
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It's really interesting the way your clauses overlap your lines. Most poets (myself included) use line-breaks as punctuation, but the way you do it gives your poems an unusual flow. It's also pretty cool the way you reference your inspirations.