Sunday, February 5, 2017

Price Of Compassion Comments

Rating: 5.0

Price of compassion
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Unwritten Soul
COMMENTS
Castellenas John 12 March 2019

Loved this work. You are a amazing story teller. Thank you for sharing the outstanding story.

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Susan Williams 18 February 2018

Yes! ! ! A poem, a short story, a screen play- never mind the category- -you drew me into your world and that of the boy's. The moral of the story was very clear and valuable in these days of doing anything to get to the top. Well done indeed. 10

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Mj Lemon 03 October 2017

A very compelling story, Soul. I kept thinking of that old cliche- heart of gold. You demonstrate that the intensity of great bonding, grounded in humanity and love, is indeed far, far more valuable and profound than mere gold.

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Unwritten Soul 06 October 2017

YES dear...The great love among people as what you said for sure more precious than gold...nothing to compare to it. Sometimes we just look material as exchangeable, a barter system...but hearts, loves, compassion and understanding is the greatest to exchange...same value to each other, yet greater feeling inside...that magnify what life is about...Thanks dear MJL...thank you so much

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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 September 2017

It is a gorgeous and inspirational write having stunning expression on love and compassion, kindness and empathy with value. I appreciate this poem.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 26 February 2017

Truly said in a very inspiring great way. Poetic story and the goodness of compassion embedded nicely woven. The ending lines sums it up superbly. Kudos. Nice to read from your pen again, I hope u will too my latest.

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Hazel Durham 17 February 2017

Love this inspirational and beautiful write, to live with kindness, love and compassion is a gift so valuable money can't buy it! A beautifully written short story that unfolds to find a precious beauty of truth, love and peace!

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Muhammad Ali 15 February 2017

Well, friend story isn't boring and your story telling is attractive. price of compassion title is also best because I thought it will be a story with negative end but not beautiful message and emotions when it ends.

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Christopher Tye 14 February 2017

As always a wonderfully deep and thoughtful work. It's always a pleasure reading your work.

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Rebecca Navarre 12 February 2017

What A Very Deeply Beautiful Poem Of True Heart/Soul, Life! ! ! ! ! Such A Wonderful, Wonderful, Story/Poem! ! ! ! ! Thank You! ! ! ! ! So Much For Sharing This Powerful Message! ! ! ! ! Brings Smiles! ! ! ! ! Again Such Beauty! ! ! ! ! Many Many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ++++++

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Hans Vr 11 February 2017

I really think that the world will soon become more aware of the giant truth expressed in this poem. It will be the beginning of a never ending kindness revolution. I like the story, the poem, the music in the text. It is a wonderful poem

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Unwritten Soul 12 February 2017

Thank you dear, kindness is always easy to do...but maybe the opposite is easier to get trigger...thats why we should always remember some reminder of our need in life. Thanks for great words to me..i really appreciate it :)

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Sekharan Pookkat 08 February 2017

hundred thousand sacks of gold is nothing for a child sweeter than a warm hug with love and compassion!

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 February 2017

Human nature! ! Reflections. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Unwritten Soul 05 February 2017

Thanks, but as i mention there, it is a short story not a poetry..Thanks EKL

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