Thursday, April 30, 2009

Price Of Blood Comments

Rating: 3.8

Bright as day, red as rose
Precious as a pile of gold
Who can pay the price of blood
In this very life
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Beena Jal
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ata khan 16 November 2009

So true and soul stirring. I wish they can read it too. 10+++++

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Ravinder Malhotra 30 April 2009

Excellent topic to pick up and write about.....Needs polishing

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rago rago 30 April 2009

the last stanza as bright as day, read as rose, precious as a pile of gold blood will then take itss price, and you will pay with your lives......a good judgement. A very nice poem.

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Beena Jal

Beena Jal

Rawalpindi, Pakistan
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