Preying On... Comments

A fascinating poem! .. That's a pleasure to read! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++

Magnificently told! .. With excellent imagery! ..

A very astute observation on nature and human. It expresses in beautiful detail the interaction of living things. So brilliantly beautifully depicted. Another poetic gem.

Nature and human nature are sometimes like 1 complete vicious circle. Truly well written! 10

brilliant poem...water in one...club in the other...lovely narration of the incident...10

Stunning symbolic creation, a very nice poetic narration of the chain of life of preys and predators..........Awesome craft, as always my friend.....10+++

there was an ordered peck of food chain select... ecological of lessons simple and direct....

Wheels within wheels, and so life goes on... Irony of life too!

word made a paddle... The dear little worm Knowing not its doom Scraping green the leaf Never was in grief! I love to kiss this poem

good one, natures canvas beautifully pictuarised...... survival a priority in life for all,

question of survival haan! ....... nice naration.....

excellent story telling...