Thursday, December 18, 2008

Prey! Comments

Rating: 5.0

The night was dark he stalked his prey.
Running breathlessly to the woods.
Hiding crouched beneath the trees.
The leaves shook violently overhead.
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Lady Death
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pied piper 19 December 2008

You have to love all the horror in this piece. Well penned. I enjoyed reading this piece.

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*Trusting You* 18 December 2008

Hiding crouched beneath the trees. The leaves shook violently overhead. nice image. He knew her virgin blood was pure. great line. this is really good I like it. LOVE the ending. you have talent. very Enjoyable piece. Becca

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