Saturday, August 11, 2007

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I am conscious and aware.
How can this be?
I see my body lying there
but I am free.
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ivor or ivor.e hogg
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Jennifer Perryman 06 October 2007

Poet, this reminded me of, 'Poe's' 'A Dream within A Dream, ' a spirit within a body. Death, isn't anything to fear. I have always thought of myself as a free spirit. Maybe, I am dead...LOL Brilliant and mysterious poem. 'I Enjoyed'.........

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Bonnie Harding 11 August 2007

Are you sure you'd wanna come back? Nicely written Ivor, but sounds to good to refuse!

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ivor or ivor.e hogg

ivor or ivor.e hogg

Hebburn.Co Durham U.K
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