Wednesday, December 5, 2018

Pretty Sparkling Stars Comments

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A little girl looks at the pretty sparkling stars.
Soon she will be dating and driving a car.
One day she will be married and have children of her own.
And pretty soon her children will be grown.
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 13 December 2018

Lamar, this is such a nice poem. Rini is right. It is sparkling more than the stars. I loved the way you have unfolded this poem with stars and ended too, with stars.....10

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Rini shibu 09 December 2018

This poem is sparkling more than the stars

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Amir Marandi 05 December 2018

Very nice. Life in motion.

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