Tuesday, November 18, 2008

Pretty, Like That? Comments

Rating: 5.0

Is it easier to be coded and hard to decipher?
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Eloisa Gearhart
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Aaron Brown 18 November 2008

Your phrasing is searing in its intensity. I am blown away by your structure in this one. You build and build and build the ongoing tension, until finally releasing it all in that one final line to tie it all back together again. Gorgeous work.

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