Your phrasing is searing in its intensity. I am blown away by your structure in this one. You build and build and build the ongoing tension, until finally releasing it all in that one final line to tie it all back together again.
Gorgeous work.
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Your phrasing is searing in its intensity. I am blown away by your structure in this one. You build and build and build the ongoing tension, until finally releasing it all in that one final line to tie it all back together again. Gorgeous work.