Monday, July 21, 2014

Pretty Hurts Comments

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Pretty hurts
I can see painful scars on your
Smooth face
Dirty hand prints on your clean dress
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Atlay Mwenifumbo
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Roseann Shawiak 03 September 2015

A very noble cause you have expressed in your poem. Women do hide their pain and heartache within lies, not wanting to be embarrassed by the reality of what they are going through, especially any abuse by a male. Excellent poem expressing your message. Love it! Thank you for being so caring and compassionate towards the pain of women, caused by males, I commend you for your courage in writing about it! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Atlay Mwenifumbo

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