Pretty Girl. Comments

your perfect hair apply that pretty pretty......... the talent in a good write, I warm lively....

I do the same thing, My poem 'movie Rental' is pretty much a clone of the song 'holler' by blue october. Alot of my poetry is started by a song and turned into..well whatever it turns out to become. I love this one for the simple fact i can believe this as commentry for a girl to say to herself well looking in the mirror. Like she is so ashamed of her apearance her main outlet is to dig in deeper inside herself.

i had a song stuck in my head while i wrote this. i guess this is what came out.