Thursday, September 24, 2015

Prettier Ones. Comments

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Butterflies, we are seeking honey
The sweetness of honey always prefer
The beautiful flowers treats us well
The beauty of world, we enjoys
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Gangadharan nair Pulingat..
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Liza Sudina 24 September 2015

Nice! except for grammar: don't put s in plural form of verbs (we enjoy, children run) .Lovely!

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