Saturday, May 16, 2009

Pretending You'Re Not There Comments

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I see you over there
Looking at me with interest
And though I pretend I don't care
I do
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Candace Johnson
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Abid Khokhar 16 May 2009

I am trying to decide your 'you' whether wordly being or some etherial one. If it is a person, the poem is quite obvious and if it is metaphysical, it bears some deep meanings. Anyhow this dual nature of the poem also proves it poetic and thought provoking. You obstrusive mood helps u go deep down into you and it shows you subjective in nature.

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Candace Johnson

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