Tuesday, January 24, 2006

Pretending To Live Comments

Rating: 5.0

Lifeless cold lovers,
and full-bodied scotch.
A false sense of warmth,
and painful to watch.
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Jack Dylan
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Carol Ngendo 30 August 2006

alcohol is like a call girl you pick at night and hate yourself the morning after. A habit hard to dropp but once dropped our lives are much better and reverting much easier so we have to guard ourselves. Nice piece of work Jack!

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Sydney Daniels 26 January 2006

Moments of memories overwhelming.

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Sally lynn 24 January 2006

wow i really like this peom. i like your writing style

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