Monday, February 6, 2012

Pretending Comments

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Okay I'm done with pretending,
acting like I don't care,
when yet I do,
hence every minute I stare.
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Katherine Bryce
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Katherine Bryce 06 February 2012

Thank you so much! Honestly though, I didn't know what I was going to portray in this one. I knew I was going to express how I feel and what I think, but I didn't know how far I'd go with expressing it. I just knew the first few stanzas.... It was really a just pour everything out poem, however I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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Wahab Abdul 06 February 2012

A very nice poem indeed! i like the poem, i enjoyed the poem while reading, please keep writing and sharing with us...i am giving you 100/100

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