Monday, March 19, 2007

Pretend Forget Comments

Rating: 4.3

The missile nocked, Drawn tensions high
Your cruel words spoken, The bolt let fly
Precise straight and true, As such the art
Through armor breastplate and defence, Explodes my heart
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Dennis Murphy
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Fiona Davidson 12 November 2008

Well Sir...you have a definate way with words...really strikes a chord in me this one...why aren't there more poems on here from you? ....xxFi

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David Harris 22 March 2007

Dennis, plenty of heartfelt feelings in this one. As Helen has said, one never forgets, time just dulls the hurt. Nice poem. Thanks for sharing it. David

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Original Unknown Girl 20 March 2007

Love this Dennis, a most passionate write and I agree wholeheartedly, one never truly forgets, just file it in a less prominent position of importance when the need arises. Brilliant poem! HG: -) xx

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Allenika ... 19 March 2007

Nice going. feeling in words.

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