Thursday, June 13, 2013

Pressed Flowers In The Book Of Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

The preface of the book of life
A cheery carefree write
In colours that spark and blush
The first chapters drowned in dreams
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Yasmin Khan
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Aftab Alam Khursheed 23 June 2013

A poem of grief in brief words are dancing in commotion...well wrote

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Mohammed Jafer 16 June 2013

so creative. I admire ur poems... plz write more...

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Yasmin Khan 16 June 2013

I thank you dear Lasophia ma'am for taking time to read it and for your sweet advice.

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 16 June 2013

I feel what you say, I went through many, I mean many problems, tragic and unhappiness in my life, but just keep your mind on an easy, happy life wish, but take what comes, just go on and do your best to enjoy whatever is there, and you will not even see how, but your life will turn into more and more happiness. Wishing you the best.

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Anita Sehgal 16 June 2013

time cycle.. so beautifully said!

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Ramesh Rai 16 June 2013

this has multi opinion n aspect but lovely feelings.xtraordinary selection.few people wrote on this subject

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Shahzia Batool 14 June 2013

all lines balanced, well-meaning & well-composed!

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David Wood 13 June 2013

Pressed flowers sum up our lives, loves, hopes and dreams. A lovely poem.

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Farah Ilyas 13 June 2013

Awe great, u should be called poetess of nature like William Wordsworth....beautiful poem with beautiful slideshow of nature on each slide of life's book marvelously composed by u...

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So tricky a poem where in word roll..

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