Preservation Comments

I liked this poem but it lacks depth about scare crows. Like for example comparing a scarecrow to a mercernary, or to police who may be hampered in their protection of citizens by laws such as the miranda, because the scare scrow is tied to a post, or crows to criminals or theives in genenral. It reads more like a very good short story instead of poetery. Hope this makes sense.

I like this story of the scarecrow who is far more of a menace than he seems. The only thing left to do, in my opinion, is to shape the poem more, cut out dross and unnecessary words.