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quite an introspective piece. you have nicely described a scene, painted a clear picture and communicated very well here....the poem is realistic and rational. you have a sense of delving deep into self and then detaching and observing self to write beautiful pieces like these...keep up the good work....

Thank you my dear...would you be kind enough to vote. I think you'll love tommorow's piece!