Saturday, November 7, 2009

Present Strength Hidden Sorrow Comments

Rating: 5.0

I stand tall as all the misery around me floats

The words when i first heard of the sadness in my life
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Draven Cestodio
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Angelic Warrior 08 November 2009

wow...sound like my life before...but people didn't think me strong... it takes a lot of strength to stand tall and go through each day..when all you want to do is break down and cry i admire you excellent write!

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The Devils Girl 08 November 2009

Hey i loved this one the most so far. it is so good. u put alot of heart into it. it sounds like u have been having a ruff time or something like that. i loved it alot. ;) 10+++

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 November 2009

decline for I let my strength shine through Acceptance within my heart I say i am all right.............self assertion and keeping one to self is major quality in life of person which cantake her/him to desired destiny and this is what is expected off.. lovely poem and i liked it most....10 read mine....i miss... why i am different

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