Sunday, April 24, 2016

Present Into Past... Comments

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Scratching my mind
for hours
to find something eerie
and unique
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Xelam Kan™
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Bri Edwards 14 August 2016

i think it is trimmed fine. ;) bri

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Bri Edwards 14 August 2016

boredom, you type. yes, but i thought frustration also. a very cool poem. i really like it. favorite lines: my melancholic brain, and ease off the strain but all in vain. and: my two steps ahead dragging me a thousand miles back you poor guy! ! ! you or someone! bri :) to My(ever-growing) PoemList.

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Xelam Kan™ 24 April 2016

could be trimmed further...

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