Thursday, March 2, 2006

Presence Of The Goddess Comments

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The darkness,
dampened with fat teardrops
running down chubby cumulus cheeks
splashing on the tweedy lap of
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Penni Currie
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wonderful word power and the poem is awesome.

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Peter A. Crowther 04 March 2006

Lovely descriptions; the reader is transported to the sights, sounds, and scents of that magical moonlit night. Good poem

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Charles Chaim Wax 02 March 2006

a gorgeous narrative with stunning images just reading the words gives me happiness and that doen't happen often a fine [poem

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