Friday, December 9, 2005

Preposterous Comments

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Such preposterous a thought! A man with wings
Flying on high above buildings and things
Soaring through clouds floating up in the blue
The Wright brothers said, ” Birds do it. We can too.”
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Ronberge .. 09 December 2005

Hi there, I think it's a good piece. I might just suggest a chronological order to your stanzas... A bulb all aglow, A boat under water, A man with wings, A man on the moon, Just a thought on this Friday night...It would seem a more logical progression, to me anyway. Amicalement votre, Ronberge

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