Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Saturday, September 1, 2012

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No one likes to be left behind
Curse alone and feel as if blind
World has moved further
And you are still no where
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 January 2013

More Post Very good Khalil Goddard19 minutes ago Very enjoyable to read. Well written. Comment +1 interesting Andre Segovia19 minutes ago well written Comment +1 Plan Edgar Morales-Alfaro15 minutes ago Nice

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 September 2012

Sandra M. Dorazil2 minutes ago I love the direction you went with this poem! I also love the description in this poem! Just make sure you break up certain lines with commas or periods or something, otherwise it just seems like you are going on and on! Good job otherwise! : D

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 September 2012

Prepare A Plan Martin Degener8 minutes ago Awesome Work. I agree with you always have a plav Comment +1 Description!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 September 2012

No one likes to be left behind Curse alone and feel as if blind

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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