Tuesday, October 20, 2015

Prenatally Glad! ! Comments

Rating: 5.0

I have gone into the jungle,
to look for the chicks to tickle,

the drops from stalagmite twinkle,
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Ratnakar Mandlik 20 October 2015

The rushing breeze struggle to straiten All my crumbled thoughts with hot iron. They are still roaming in the virgin forest A sort of introspection, and an effort to fill the balance sheet of life itself. Wonderful philosophical touch in the thought provoking verse. Enjoyed it.10 points to the poem.

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Gajanan Mishra 20 October 2015

roaming in the virgin forest, good one..

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