Monday, May 14, 2007

Prelude To 'You' Comments

Rating: 5.0

You...it was only you who I could feel was mine..
But I didn't know that the twist of fate is such a swine..
You..left me with nothing but few thoughts sublime..
Don't You..remember the time..
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Alok Singhal
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Kseniya (Xeny) Rundel 24 June 2011

I like it very much and vote it 10+

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Dew Twinkle 14 December 2009

I think it is a very good poem, thanks for shearing it. It is so true what you say; 'nothing is yours for real'. :)

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Onelia Avelar 05 July 2008

I like the contradiction between the first and the closing line - as if in between are years and years...Well penned

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Charles Garcia 26 May 2007

very well written, i had the feelings a long time ago at the age of 15 oh! so long ago, charles garcia

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