Prelude To The Storm Or The Battle On The River Comments

Never saw a literary work end on a comma...I like it, and the piece in general.One must chew thorouhly on your unorthodox use of puctuation, in order to digest the text itself, and be able to read or recite it with mellifluous results.John Donne was a master at delivering emotion, breath & conotation, through well placed puctuation.You do this here through your employment of pausemarking, and elision.The final comma, i will presume is in lieu of a (...) or a thought that has yet no closure.Good job. FjR