Sunday, October 11, 2015

Prelude To Rain Comments

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Daybreak: monsoon clouds thicken, sail across the sky,
darkening its blue expanse, blotting out the eastern glow.
Hushed silence; a sudden boom, and rain comes down,
pattering against the window pane; I throw it open.
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Ajit Das
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Terry Craddock 29 June 2016

'Daybreak: monsoon clouds thicken, sail across the sky, darkening its blue expanse, blotting out the eastern glow.' exquisite and the humanity of 'Across the road a footpath dweller in deep slumber opens his half-asleep eyes from the sunken sockets, as rain drops fall on the unshaven face, tattered dress; rain brings to him no respite, only despair for a shelter.' these are poems which need to be written and read

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Ajit Das 29 June 2016

Thank you very much for liking the poem. Regards, Ajit Das

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