Thursday, October 8, 2009

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Prelude To Autumn! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Comments

Rating: 3.1

As the monsoon recedes, with vengeance
Sun livid strikes back, but gives up pretence
By mid noon, it retreats and westwards race,
Far from city scape, it slips leaving no trace.
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Mamta Agarwal
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Obinna Eruchie 20 October 2009

Those are beautiful words on autumn.

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Ritty Patnaik 14 October 2009

there is a feeling of soothing, calm and gentleness about this poem.beautiful experience to read and enjoythoroughly.great write mamta! best wishes. ritty

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Ankur Ankur 13 October 2009

a wonderful poem. thanks for sharing all the best.

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Sandra Fowler 10 October 2009

Your poetic music plays a beautiful prelude to autumn. Thank you for permitting me to share this experience with you. You have created moonlight magic with your creative pen. Love, SandraX

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Vidi Writes 09 October 2009

When the prelude is so lucid and stunning What would be the plight of season upcoming? Sensation touches sky high This read takes me into paradise so I sigh. To quote Emily Bronte.. 'Every leaf speaks bliss to me, fluttering from the autumn tree” Here, every line speaks heaven to me Uttering from the autumn glee. Nice..nice and only nice... is this.

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Bob Blackwell 09 October 2009

Mamta, you wrote this with the gentle air of bliss, a stillness that accepts life as it comes, lights go out but moonbeams caress your face, Relief from heat of day at dusk. A lovely poem that goes into my favourites. Warm regards Bob 10+++

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Sandra Martyres 09 October 2009

A beautiful prelude to Autumn Mamta.....one of the most colourful seasons of the year depending in which place you are...10/10

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Kesav Easwaran 09 October 2009

a poet's sweet welcome to Autumn's prelude...thanks...10

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C. P. Sharma 08 October 2009

I embrace the quiet; no background score or strains. It sums up the mind and mood of the prelude.10+++++++++ CP

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Raj Nandy 08 October 2009

A GREAT PRELUDE TO AUTUMN! As always 10! -Raj

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Raj Nandy 08 October 2009

A GREAT PRELUDE TO AUTUMN! As always 10! -Raj

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Lynda Robson 08 October 2009

A beautiful serene write about Autumn, thanks 10 Lynda xxx

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Sadiqullah Khan 08 October 2009

Ah, I am always enthralled by the serenity of your words! ! ! !

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Sarwar Chowdhury 08 October 2009

sweet autumn captured sweetly ---fine phrasology! ................pictographs are beauteous! --------------compact beauty bloomed! 101010101010+

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rago rago 08 October 2009

well write and expressions............beautiful..............

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