Wednesday, August 20, 2014

Pregnant Smile Comments

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Mouthful,
lips shuts,
the wide grin.
That deceptive curve.
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Maureen Alikor
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Chinedu Dike 20 September 2014

You captured the intimacy and essence of the PREGNANT SMILE. As I read the first stanza the poem l caught myself trying to mimic the smile. I have always said that to write a good poem, the articulation, insight, penning; are more important than the subject matter. A lovely poem subtly penned, your poem. Thanks for sharing and keep it up.

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