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In born anxiety about life after death- - Subhashchandra Adhav1 hour ago The poem reflects mysterious attraction towards Heavenly Abode that is final destination and destiny of everyone, you have expressed it well with reference to the mundane ambience- - - - - Nicely structured and well composed piece- - - - Really food for thought- - - - - Very elegant work- - - - Keep it coming- - - Thanks for sharing.

Ok. Samantha Pluszczynski2 hours ago I feel you have a lot of anger built up about certain parts of your life.One where you feel welcome and another where you don't know where to go. Let yourself go and delve into where your mind is at one certain time. There is a beginning, end and conclusion, but after if all where do you see yourself. Not just in the moment, but from where that fear brought you to understanding for your future. Comment +1

not bad Billy Loving2 hours ago could use some revision Comment +1

okay Nathaniel HoBs Jenkins2 hours ago okay

As they say home is where the heart is, nicely written.

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