Tuesday, September 15, 2020

Preference Comments

Rating: 5.0

Riding over the ocean
Never was my dream
But with your eyes
I saw it once for all
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Varsha M
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Mahtab Bangalee 15 September 2020

Life is all about preferences....yeah exactly Life has its own choice to live on this earth independently; time to time it adopts everything........

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Deluke Muwanigwa 15 September 2020

Beautiful poem VM. Shory concise flowing and boom! the message is clear. Dont give up though the adventure is in crossing the Indian Ocean past Muaritius then Malagasy then boom! Then you are in Mozambique. I joke. Great poem.

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Dr Antony Theodore 15 September 2020

Painting colors on sky as I like Building castle splendid in mind Seeing through way beyond time Sailing across sea that seemed mine. Really beautiful wonderful poetic lines deep from your heart dear poetess - tony

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M Asim Nehal 15 September 2020

Yes you are absolutely right. Some dreams remains as dreams whereas some we try and make it come true. Thoughtful poem 5 Stars....

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Rajnish Manga 15 September 2020

Building castle splendid in mind Seeing through way beyond time.... //.... Awesome imagery. Love becomes an exotic feeling after a point in its journey. Thanks. Its a delight to read the poem.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 15 September 2020

A well scribed expression. Truly astounding...10++++++

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