Predicament Comments

I am no one to criticise your work, but having read a few of your poems, I think you have the feel for life, don't dilute your ink of expression with tears, they normally get nothing, result into nothing, and are over emphasised sodium chloride aqueous solutions. Burn the tears by the fire within. Write on.

I am all but lost. good one. thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.