Wednesday, April 2, 2008

Predator’s Prey Comments

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A young boy is crumbled in a bundle small
Under wooden boards of stairs outdoor
His breath is held as he grips the ground of the floor
In his back an ache, from the angst in his heart a longed-for break
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Ella Marien Jacobs 02 January 2010

Sjoe, it sound like quite a nightmare! I could see and feel the tension of every action and thought! Well done!

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Francois Hoon

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