Tuesday, August 13, 2013

Predator Comments

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A man with a borrowed soul
hiding the devil behind his eyes
he sits waiting with a fake smile
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Dave Alan Walker
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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 16 August 2013

Nice warning to prey. Beware of fake gestures. Thank you for a beautiful poem.

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Lyn Paul 14 August 2013

Words that are a little haunting. We know these predators are out there but do forget. Thank you for reminding us in a very clever way.

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Geetha Jayakumar 14 August 2013

Wow..wonderful write.. Well said....We cannot change anyone but we ourselves can change....Loved reading it.

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Heather Wilkins 13 August 2013

there are many people such as this i n this world, beware. good poem Dave

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Dave Alan Walker

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