Tuesday, May 7, 2013

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Betrayed by the one closest to the heart
Fall as the knife once again pierces the back
Bleeding internally struggling to get up and run away
Tears are fake as touches were forced
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Teasia Ruffin
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Kelly Seale 17 June 2013

Oh, so raw and naked are your words... I am speechless... why do you do this to me? pls read my poem entitled A Rose By Any Other Name Very deep and emotional Write Teasia!) sorry about misspelling your name before.: (Kelly.

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Ace Of Black Hearts 07 May 2013

Wow, those emotions are extreme to the point of being ragged. Sounds like overtime, you came to hate him, but at the beginning you loved him. Good Poem.

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