Monday, January 23, 2023

Precisely Comments

Rating: 4.8

The way you treated me
Reflects your character
Your gigantic self-image
Will be tried and tested
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Aarzoo Mehek
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Jim McGill 26 January 2023

Great poem.

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Jim McGill 26 January 2023

It seems that the Trumps of this life will never be held to account.

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David Wood 25 January 2023

Well done for cutting them down to the size if the gutter they walk in. Top marks Aarzoo.

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Bri Edwards 25 January 2023

Though I 'abandoned' my belief in god/God over 50 years ago, I still abide by The Golden Rule which goes something like this: 'Do unto otherrs as you would have them do unto you.' Well, I more or less abide by it. I still won't share my ice cream! bri ;)

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 January 2023

A powerful poem that carries a stern warning. A well executed write.

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 24 January 2023

Simplicity is the root of precise

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As Susie says, maybe Aarzoo had run into Trump. Maybe not. For Trumps are strewn everywhere. There's no escape

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Aarzoo Mehek 24 January 2023

We have to find a way among all this chaos

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Anil Kumar Panda 23 January 2023

No one can escape from His eyes. Karma will follow. Very nicely written.

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Nabakishore Dash 23 January 2023

A nice write reflecting'As we sow, so shall we reap' Aarzooji.

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Susan Williams 23 January 2023

sounds like you ran into Trump! ! ! ! unfortunately there are so many of them in life and probably always has been---enjoyed this poem very much

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Aarzoo Mehek 24 January 2023

Hahahahahaha we all come across Trump at one point of time. This feedback brought a smile on my face.

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Jim McGill 26 January 2023

Great comment.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 23 January 2023

I really like this one Bravo!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 23 January 2023

Your lies and treachery will be put into account and you will be dealt with precisely....if not today, surely someday....if not here, surely somewhere...if not by a human, surely by God.

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Aarzoo Mehek 24 January 2023

There is always god to take account. But not at our time but in His time.

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