Precise Times Comments

Dear poet valsa; Hello...Your excellent and distinctive reading brings the soul back to this abandoned poetry. I wish you a good health, happiness and success

Seeing the lush green colour, one might long to jump down into the greens like the cat. But by the time we land there, we come to realize that the green colour has changed and faded into withering yellow. When we stand confused, life turns her back like a dishonest lover! What a wealth of meaning! Profound! Top marks!

life's a dishonest lover first embracing, colouring it in a green dress but when it fades into yellow turning her face from it.................. Indeed life is a dishonest lover, never stable but fickle and unpredictable!

The poem and the image that goes with it, both are beautiful and convey some deep and profound philosophy of life. Yes, time is precise and there is nothing so accurate as time though biological time and clock time, (we shall rather call it temporal time) are different.

Dear poet Rose Marie Juan-austin Hello and thanks Always your intelligence reading enrich the text and opining another door for better understanding, only the professional poet and critic can write such amazing comments, much appreciating with a kind regards

" The biological clock and the world's clock are different but both give a precise time." Very perceptive and thought provoking lines from a marvelous poem. To my Poem List.

A powerful, insightful and poignant write. Yes, time is precise and has its own course. An integral part of living a life full of intricacies. Deep and meaningful lines with great imagery that only a perceptive mind can create and deliver.

A great philosophical write. Soran's poems can create a beautiful picture yet the most memorable part of his poems can convey a universal truth about life. He can create strong emotion by the use of strong strokes.

Dear Susan Williams I hope it doesn't happen to you, but that is the condition of many people nowadays, thanks for your lovely comment on my humble poem

when you wake at 2.00am you know something is wrong- - - - -yes, there is such a feeling of foreboding in waking to the silence of the wee hours of the night and the soul- - -10+++

the Cat is very strange creature, they are so clean and clever Charles Bukowski, in (My Cats) saying: when I am feeling low all I have to do is watch my cats and my courage returns. I study these creatures. they are my teachers.

I like this one, I like the empathy you show for the cat (made me smile) as cats, mostly just want to hunt any little critter that moves, or pretend to fight off enemies, even if that 'enemy' is a single blade fo grass, blowing, tantalising, in the breeze.

You unveil a blatant truth after bringing a beautiful imagery here. Brilliant style of poem making. Congrats Soran 10+

Sorry for the slip, Thanks dear Soren... that missing n was so important!

Thanks, dear Sore, but professional poet, I am not, just a poet if at all. ...and being an old man I've now forgotten what technique I suggested, but thanks for your sentiments, I wish you well for the coming New Year, all the best...

Abstract and philosophical, and an illustration that gives rise to such a beautiful poem, lovely

you are a brilliant poet that is why you liked my poem, the beauty is in the eye of the beholder, many thanks again

An insightful poem......fine. Thank u. anjandev Roy.

Time troubles humans! Perfect poem!

Empty path! ! Abandoned cat! ! Lonely, Watching the clock, As time moves on. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.