Rain falls asyncope
white noise splattering
on dry ground...
...
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Dear Hugh, A delicious word painting. 'storm a microcosm of my own lachrymosity' is effulgent. It really is comforting to know there are bona fide poets at PH, and you sir, are indeed one of them. Bravo! 'the harmonious unison of man with nature' -Thomas Carlyle, essayist and historian. Supportively, Gregory
A very expressive write; great wording to describe standing in the rain.