(((Precious Time)) Tanka Comments
Time clicking always
Seems so fast for those who wait
Like everlasting
But too short for those who care
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Great work here Marvin you are mastering all styles of poetry...from acrostic, free verse, now tanka...Fine imagery used, a thought provoking piece.10++++
I don't know much about tankas but I liked yours.O am attempting here for you: Time’s eyes blink Love dives deep into the soul Unfathomable depths Mocking at Time’s existence Fill the time with blissfulness. CP
that was so meaningful...u encompass your thought in few words so beautifully... : D
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8/15/2025 12:48:48 PM # 1.0.0
The ever ticking clock...thank you this is lovely....Fi